Ive edited The Doorway to correct several grammar errors, a few spelling errors and redid some of the wording. I trust the changes will make the story easier to read and more enjoyable. For those that are interested this story was written using Canadian English, so you may find a few words that dont look quite right. I want to thank J. Mila Ramos for her help editing this story and in particular with Catherines character. I have also received help from a source that I cannot name by request that went over the story as well to correct several errors. Any remaining errors, mistakes or story weaknesses that you find are entirely my fault. I hope you enjoy part one; parts two and three will also be redone in the coming weeks. As with most writers any comments -and votes- will be greatly appreciated.
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Prelude
Daniel noticed her for the first time in the coffee shop, a beautiful woman who looked so up tight with a suppressed truth she was ready to explode. He clothes, her necklac...
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